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Stupid girl
Tears count for nothing
   NOTHING
Weakness is not virtue
It is sin

Stupid, stupid girl
Tears falling in pools
At the feet of those
Who care nothing for you
Those who sin against themselves

Stupid girl
Placing things on faith
Hope in life even
Devoid of such pain
UNHAPPINESS
The eternal punishment
©2007-2009 ~devlishangel
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Again, I wrote this when I was really depressed. I'm not sure who I was referring to, but I do know that when I get in that state I feel like there is no one in the world who matters or cares.

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i especially like the line "weakness is not a virtue it is a sin" its really powerful. the repetition of stupid girl too is very effective as well as the capital words. hope you're okay now since these couple of poems have been pretty dark!

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Buffy: Angel
Angel: Buffy
Xander: Xander

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